tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8084695768619835985.post2321183335289438389..comments2024-03-28T11:12:23.795-04:00Comments on Langley Writes: Smile, Modine: Flash FictionLangley Cornwellhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02064219496272043638noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8084695768619835985.post-74160078295198519942011-07-09T19:59:32.377-04:002011-07-09T19:59:32.377-04:00I'll try to remember this one the next time I&...I'll try to remember this one the next time I'm riding the city bus and feeling impatient about such occurrences. I do, too--I feel impatient. Unfortunately.Eccentricityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07034427885711017365noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8084695768619835985.post-10102419734757366582011-07-09T19:40:51.000-04:002011-07-09T19:40:51.000-04:00Nice! What a fabulous descriptive turn - I love t...Nice! What a fabulous descriptive turn - I love the comparison of the woman to the bus.Staciehttp://www.stacieturnerphotography.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8084695768619835985.post-62958890717659840862011-07-08T14:44:58.454-04:002011-07-08T14:44:58.454-04:00I really liked this little story. I felt her pain....I really liked this little story. I felt her pain. Nice work!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8084695768619835985.post-82635438567228788652011-07-07T18:08:14.854-04:002011-07-07T18:08:14.854-04:00A great post!! Unfortunately we will all eventuall...A great post!! Unfortunately we will all eventually deal with the inevitability of aging.<br /><br />Kathy<br />http://www.thetruckerswife.com/Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11564863484894692249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8084695768619835985.post-84430107944765520082011-07-06T15:59:08.441-04:002011-07-06T15:59:08.441-04:00A great post, thank you and a searing reminder of...A great post, thank you and a searing reminder of the inevitability of aging!JULIE HOYLEhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16551224443405356944noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8084695768619835985.post-49244592252898595072011-07-06T14:44:07.950-04:002011-07-06T14:44:07.950-04:00How well done, how sad, and, unfortunately, how pr...How well done, how sad, and, unfortunately, how prophetic. <br />Pam <br /><a href="http://apiratelookspastsixty.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">A Pirate Looks Past Sixty</a>pbquighttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04299353357683410509noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8084695768619835985.post-44604431266922273972011-07-06T11:45:51.573-04:002011-07-06T11:45:51.573-04:00Poor Modine! I hope she finds a reason to smile la...Poor Modine! I hope she finds a reason to smile later in the day.Kristin Aquariannhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10016163705498153247noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8084695768619835985.post-7252167097483008732011-07-06T06:03:48.631-04:002011-07-06T06:03:48.631-04:00Excellent description. I can sympathise right now....Excellent description. I can sympathise right now. Problem with my heel and I'm moving on half speed! However, it's me who is getting frustrated with me *chuckle* Cool write :)Mojo Writinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09457472397010589516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8084695768619835985.post-68155518421817637522011-07-05T23:06:16.203-04:002011-07-05T23:06:16.203-04:00You did really well! You brought me right on the b...You did <b>really</b> well! You brought me right on the bus and wrapped it all up in exactly the right number of words. Great job, Langley!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8084695768619835985.post-54947278617077713172011-07-05T19:54:39.814-04:002011-07-05T19:54:39.814-04:00Awww...how sad and realistic... We never know of a...Awww...how sad and realistic... We never know of another's pain.Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00713984363662035139noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8084695768619835985.post-89354493993887481302011-07-05T15:44:17.106-04:002011-07-05T15:44:17.106-04:00Great approach!Great approach!Claudia Moserhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15749097943320550338noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8084695768619835985.post-56259847294322393712011-07-04T23:51:40.755-04:002011-07-04T23:51:40.755-04:00I really liked this...brought up some strong empat...I really liked this...brought up some strong empathy for sure!Maggiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17601103760591682505noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8084695768619835985.post-62711987537210981372011-07-04T23:27:00.683-04:002011-07-04T23:27:00.683-04:00That was great and I could almost hear the grumbli...That was great and I could almost hear the grumbling from the others!Jennihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03586517559290989595noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8084695768619835985.post-68197130437426175112011-07-04T22:39:14.023-04:002011-07-04T22:39:14.023-04:00This is awesome! =D
--Diana JillianThis is awesome! =D<br /><br />--Diana JillianAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8084695768619835985.post-9565622289800829742011-07-04T21:11:27.754-04:002011-07-04T21:11:27.754-04:00my knee hurts!! : ) awesome...as alwaysmy knee hurts!! : ) awesome...as alwaysBrenda Stevenshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01673692345871148871noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8084695768619835985.post-7668816870383207612011-07-04T20:38:50.907-04:002011-07-04T20:38:50.907-04:00Nice first draft. It's always amazing what our...Nice first draft. It's always amazing what our mind spill out off the cuff.shellyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09596621767297173021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8084695768619835985.post-75514959625708665372011-07-04T20:21:59.265-04:002011-07-04T20:21:59.265-04:00Great job with this week's post!!Great job with this week's post!!Jennhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07559573562599754752noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8084695768619835985.post-45587728747587355412011-07-04T19:05:15.040-04:002011-07-04T19:05:15.040-04:00Great job with the challenge. I can picture the wh...Great job with the challenge. I can picture the whole scene so vividly. Love the last part where you compare Modine to the feeble bus. Love it!Cathyhttp://www.catmuses.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.com